tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7035237221401815009.post930901069433807406..comments2024-01-01T18:16:49.051-05:00Comments on Write With Pictures: Fridays Poetry: Featured Post Winnerseptembermomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01570525910483384484noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7035237221401815009.post-65158279146571103032010-08-31T20:18:06.474-04:002010-08-31T20:18:06.474-04:00two edits:
3rd line - "thy will" instea...two edits:<br /> 3rd line - "thy will" instead of "they will"<br /><br /> 5th line - add "the" after "beside" and before "water's"<br /><br />Thanks!Danihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05725881252851352861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7035237221401815009.post-46663108880656279882010-08-31T11:47:10.426-04:002010-08-31T11:47:10.426-04:00O my love, with hair like gold
your beauty torment...O my love, with hair like gold<br />your beauty torments my heart to scold<br />I am but a fool fainting to they will<br />Please come to meet me upon Treasure Hill<br />I will await you beside water's glass<br />Under the roof by the deck I'll await you, my lass<br />Until the sky darkens one hundred fold<br />I'll wait for you, my love, until the weather turns cold<br />Please come to meet me upon Treasure Hill<br />O that my heart breaks, if only you willDanihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05725881252851352861noreply@blogger.com